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Month: January 2022

Of Davids and Goliaths: To Paradise by Hanya Yanagihara

I feel I’ve been lucky with Hanya Yanagihara, in that I happen to have read her in the right order. When I first started to hear about her debut novel The People in the Trees, it was a book few people seemed to have come across, let alone read. I went into it with no preconceptions – and came away mesmerised. I would still count that novel – a hard-hitting, tightly-wrought, highly individual and sometimes contentious piece of speculative eco-fiction – as a steel-bright masterpiece, the kind of confident, original writing not often encountered in a debut and that leaves you both eager and impatient to see where the author will go next.

Where Yanagihara went next, of course, was A Little Life, that steaming juggernaut of a novel that for bizarre reasons of its own became that year’s literary sensation and is still one of the most divisive books of the decade. I rollocked through A Little Life; I found the story unputdownable, even though I never entirely saw the point of it, how it made sense as a follow-up to The People in the Trees. And I worried about Yanagihara as a writer. When a book is that successful, it can have a detrimental effect on a career, bending it so badly out of shape, leaving so little privacy or room for future experiment, that it is sometimes impossible for the writer to fully recover.

There was a part of me that wondered if we would hear from her again, and so when I learned, sometime last year, that her third novel was imminent I felt both delighted – she was back after all! – and intrigued. What were we going to get this time, and how were the Fanyagiharas going to react to it? I knew going in that the book was speculative, which excited me; I knew also that To Paradise was bound to be one of the literary ‘big beasts’ of 2022, which excited me in spite of myself. As another 800-pager, would it be worth my reading time, and how could it possibly live up to the hype that was already erupting?

The answer is yes, and yes. Just hours after finishing To Paradise, I find myself in mourning for it, a book that gave me for the first time in a long time that kind of reading experience one remembers from childhood: the sense of living inside a world, of being on a journey with characters who will continue to journey with you for the rest of your life. More than that, though, one could argue that To Paradise is not so much book of the year as book of this year, that it belongs precisely and inimitably to now, that it is an important piece of political fiction that will remain as a guiding landmark in the literary landscape.

I loved this book, which thrilled me and made me feel vindicated and left me fearful for our future. It also helped me to understand where A Little Life fits into the scheme of things, Yanagihara-wise, how her literary project appears to be unfolding. In terms of her craft, where Yanagihara excels most is in her storytelling, a fluidly compelling, deceptively easy style that keeps her thousands of readers turning pages even when the narrative brings up difficult subject matter and draws ambiguous conclusions. Such was the mass appeal of A Little Life; To Paradise is equally readable but I would say meatier and more challenging, even as it demonstrates how Yanagihara’s works are not just great stories, they are about story.  

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There are plenty of synopses of To Paradise available online, so I will refrain from rehashing the plot here, except to say that the novel is divided into three ‘Books’, the first set in 1893, the second in 1993, and the third Book, which occupies half the novel’s page count, is a split narrative, alternating between the book’s end-point in 2093 and decreasing intervals from fifty years before that. Much has been made of Yanagihara’s use of names in To Paradise, with some readers enjoying the repeated appearances of the same set of names throughout the three parts of the book, with others finding the device confusing, pointless, pretentious or all three.   

Names have always held immense significance for me in my own fiction, and as a writer who has previously made use of devices not dissimilar to Yanagihara’s, I find her latticework of repeating names affecting, powerful and structurally significant, an anchoring weight that helps to give the sprawling, multiple timelines shape and direction, and offers the reader a guiding light on their way through the story.

As a fuller and more detailed explanation of what Yanagihara is doing, I find a musical analogy works best: think of To Paradise as a symphony, and the repeating names and situations as musical subjects and leitmotifs, and her purpose becomes instantly clear. The first movement, 1893, is an exercise in classic sonata form, a propulsive allegro, strongly melodic and in a minor key. With its clearly articulated conflicts, reversals and sense of jeopardy it appeals instantly to our emotions. In this section we meet our three dominant melodic subjects, ‘David Bingham’, ‘Charles Griffith’, and ‘Edward Bishop’, alongside their secondary subjects and recurring leitmotifs, ‘Peter’, ‘Eden’, ‘Adams’, ‘Nathaniel’ and others. We learn how David is an outsider, prone to mental illness and a sense of alienation, how he is guided towards an anchoring stability in the form of Charles, how his own passionate desires propel him towards uncertainty and possible disaster in the form of Edward. As a background continuo we have a pandemic, and the theme of the house, of Washington Square, an enveloping, grounding presence that is also a cage.    

The central movement’s twin elegies are stories of farewell, the first a ballet in which David vacillates between safe, rich Charles and his penniless but beautiful servant, the second is a lament, a letter written by the ghost of David’s troubled father. The extended final movement has alternating first and second subjects that gradually become interleaved in a mighty fugue. In this complex finale, we encounter leitmotifs familiar from the previous movements. As in a symphony, this accumulation of themes, our sense of recognition as we re-encounter them works to intensify our experience, reminding us of what has gone before and why it matters to us, which themes and persons are of greatest significance to the composer. The effect is magnificent, unified, cathartic.

Reading To Paradise bears comparison with listening to Wagner, in that anything approaching true understanding can only be encompassed by making the whole journey, by seeing the thing through to its end, and that is part of its joy. Before starting out, I had seen Book One described as Jamesian – its title, Washington Square, is a pretty major clue – and so while I found Yanagihara’s storytelling as addictive as ever, I could not avoid a feeling of disappointment either. Although I could see where readers were coming from in their comparisons with Henry James and Edith Wharton, the prose felt too smooth, too directed, too easily consumable, more James-pastiche than true Master, too much like a fairy tale. As with A Little Life, I was struggling to see the point. It is not until some hundreds of pages later, and the feather-light recapitulation in Book Three, that it becomes obvious that this atmosphere of fairy tale is no accident, that this has been Yanagihara’s secret intention all along.

In Yanagihara’s 2093, the US has become a kind of simulacrum of North Korea: while elements of community, friendship, humanity and even pleasure remain, life as we know it has become heavily circumscribed. The idea of individual choice has become eroded, opportunities for self-expression are negligible to nil. In such an atmosphere of oppression, the role of the Storytellers – in a world where books are forbidden, those who used to be writers are allowed a limited outlet through the oral tradition – becomes doubly important, the idea of story itself as an agent for change takes on a new intensity,

That some commentators have complained that the ‘letters’ within the text do not read like real letters, that the repetition of names and situations is an artificial construct seems like a red herring to me, an ignoring of the fact that all novels and stories are constructs, and that the idea of literary verisimilitude is a construct also. Yanagihara is not trying to write like Henry James – to write like James is not simply a matter of aping a style, but of feeling the weight of opinion and tacit knowledge and the relationship to history that comes with having lived through James’s time. For us, now, ‘writing like James’ can never be anything more than an act of ventriloquism. What Yanagihara does in Book One is to tell a story; Yanagihara’s Washington Square is not a serious attempt to replicate James’s approach, but a nod towards a form. Wika’s letter in Book Two cannot exist, because Wika is dead, but within the house of cards that all novels are, how can that matter? As with the Storytellers in Washington Square Park in Book Three, we should not expect ‘facts’ from Yanagihara, so much as emotional truth.

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What makes To Paradise important as political fiction is that in this time of huge uncertainties, Yanagihara is brave enough and independent-minded enough to take on massive questions without feeling the need to provide easy or comfortable answers. Whether within the context of an oppressive class structure, the toxic legacy of colonialism or the dangerous malleability of scientific fact, what Yanagihara is most concerned with is our propensity to ignore an empirical truth in favour of jumping on a community bandwagon, our preference for judgement as opposed to analysis, our championing of a strident black-and-white argument over the more muted shades of grey in which reality manifests.  

Book Three of To Paradise contains some of the most pointedly urgent and questioning analysis of our current reality that has so far appeared, a depiction of a world teetering on the brink of multiple catastrophes, spurred on by ill luck, bad judgement and conflicting interests. There are doubtless many more novels still in progress that attempt to deal with the questions arising from the COVID-19 pandemic, to depict its corrosive material and intellectual effects on the world we inhabit, but I am going to stick my neck out and say that To Paradise will hold its ground, that it will come to be seen as an era-defining novel, not because it is realistic in the way a nineteenth-century novel is deemed to be realistic – it is not trying to be – but because of the risks it takes, because the questions it dares to ask will still seem relevant.

As with all great novels, To Paradise is important because of the way in which it uses the particular to illuminate the universal, the times to reveal the timeless; in her endlessly circling reiterations, her multiplicity of time frames, Yanagihara shows how much of the terror and frustration of history is enshrined in the fact that it is all but impossible for one generation to learn from another, how in order to progress, each needs to experience for themselves how the world is, all too often with disastrous results. Seeing the timelines converge in Book Three, watching as the characters move from living a life we ourselves would recognise towards a darker state of being entirely, I felt an aching sadness, all of the time, and that feeling of living through a before-times, as we are ourselves.  

Cloak and Dagger #1/30 – Any crime but murder: Those Who Walk Away by Patricia Highsmith

‘If you did kill him,’ she said in a whisper, ‘and if someone else found him that night – they might have been afraid to report it. Don’t you think? Some people are like that. They’d rather walk away – or push the body into a canal.’ Her brows trembled.

Everybody would rather walk away, Ray thought.

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Trust me to begin this challenge with the last item on the list! This was actually a re-read, so I might feel tempted to double up on this category later in the year with something entirely new. But revisiting Highsmith is always a joy and always time well spent.

Patricia Highsmith is routinely described as a crime writer, a label she herself found irksome as she disliked being categorised – she thought of her books simply as novels, and did not see the need or point of allocating them to a particular genre. Given Highsmith’s genius for writing crime novels in which no crime takes place, her ambivalence around the term is understandable.

There are some very nasty murders in Highsmith; equally, there are books of hers in which the shadow of murder hangs like the sword of Damocles over the entire proceedings without ever falling. This seeming unwillingness to commit herself wholeheartedly to the traditional form of the thriller, in which a crime is committed, generating situational or moral chaos before eventually being resolved, preferably with the villain getting their deserved comeuppance, did not endear her to her American editors. In Europe, the interior, almost philosophical nature of her novels has ensured for her work a popularity that extends far beyond the Ripley novels and Strangers on a Train.

I return to Highsmith’s books again and again because they offer a radically different interpretation of what is meant by crime fiction. Her novels offer us questions with no firm answers: if we can read crime novel knowing from the outset that no crime takes place, what exactly is it that we are responding to? And what are the particular properties that make crime fiction so compelling?

In Those Who Walk Away, Rayburn Garrett is a young art dealer whose wife, Peggy, has recently committed suicide. Ray is distraught at her death, and plagued by an unfocused sense of guilt that he should have been able to foresee what was coming, and did not. Peggy’s father Ed Coleman has no doubt that Ray is to blame – he considers him feckless, charmless and insensitive, and the more he dwells on his daughter’s death, the more his grief becomes tangled up with his obsessive and irrational hatred for his indolent son-in-law.

After making a half-hearted, one might almost say experimental attempt on Ray’s life in Rome, Coleman heads for Venice with his current mistress Inez and an entourage of hangers-on. Inez pleads with Ray that he should not try to see Coleman, that he is not in a state of mind to listen to reason. Ray promises her he will leave Venice without speaking to him, then does the exact opposite. What plays out over the next fortnight or so is a kind of duel, a chase in slow motion through the wintry streets of a city bedding down for the off-season. There are acts of violence, but none of them prove fatal. There are acts of deception, but in true Highsmithian fashion these are wilful and ultimately pointless. The moments of highest tension are generated from brief sightings in a busy street, inconclusive phone calls, the imagined repercussions of a confrontation that never plays out.    

Part of the magic for me during this reread was being able to keep track of Ray and Coleman via Google Streetview. When I first read Those Who Walk Away, which must have been about twenty years ago, there was no such thing. Still, I remember being entranced by Highsmith’s portrait of Venice, which is unsentimental to the point of being mundane. Her writing reveals the city’s split identity, its humdrum aspect, which might never become apparent to those who come as tourists.

Highsmith knew Venice well but had something of an on-off relationship with the place. Her descriptions leave us in no doubt of the city’s beauty as it is perceived by its millions of visitors, but they make us aware also of the ways in which for those who live there, Venice is entirely ordinary. Highsmith’s Venice is a city where working people go to and from their jobs, where small, backstreet cafes have their regular morning clientele, where grievances are settled behind closed doors and minor corruption flourishes. Bad weather settles in for days. Unwary Americans shiver in unheated lodgings. Life goes on.

As Coleman and Ray pursue each other through the less frequented backstreets, I found myself checking their locations online, compelled to glimpse something of what they might have seen, not just the thronged and glittering quaysides of Zattere and Schiavoni but also the plainer, less frequented back lots and alleyways of Chioggia and Giudecca, where Ray and Coleman alternately take refuge in the homes of ordinary Venetians.

And of course I fell more in love with the myth of Venice than ever, of course I’m all the more determined to finally visit, once travel becomes less insane. I shall go in the off season, when it’s chilly and when, or so I understand, there are marginally fewer people. I want to sit in a cafe and read, in an unknown little square somewhere. I want to reread Invisible Cities, and think about Ray spinning falsehoods to Elisabetta and finding he cannot bear to leave the city until he has settled the business of Coleman once and for all…

Early on in the narrative, Ray buys a silk scarf he happens to notice in a shop window because it seems so exactly like the kind of scarf his wife Peggy might have owned and treasured. A chapter or two later, Coleman notices the scarf, which Ray has pulled out of his pocket by accident, and demands Ray hand it over. He immediately assumes that it is Peggy’s, and that as such he has a right to it. Ray feels aggrieved and affronted whilst at the same time nurturing a feeling of vindicated spite: the scarf isn’t Peggy’s, so more fool Coleman. This scarf becomes a symbolic stand-in for the acts of duplicity, of mistaken-ness, for the unprovable lies that criss-cross the narrative. It might also be taken as a cipher for the novel’s most notable absence, that is, Peggy herself.

I don’t just mean that Peggy is dead before the novel opens – we never actually get to meet her as a living person. What comes across still more strongly is the fact that neither of these men who are purportedly fighting over her – locking horns like stags, the old king and the venal upstart – would seem to have the slightest clue about who she really was or what she was like.

Both Coleman and Ray go along with and contribute to the received opinion about Peggy, that she was ‘unworldly’, idealistic, more child than woman, that she was somehow ‘disappointed’ by the reality of life and so decided to end it.  Her presence flickers at the corner of our consciousness, barely seen, ghostly, not just because she is dead but because no one seemed to pay her sufficient attention when she was alive.

We know that like her father she was a talented artist – but neither Ray nor Coleman seems much interested in why she more or less gave up painting in the months before her death. Coleman’s grief comes across mostly as the inarticulate, violent rage of a man rudely divested of a valuable possession. As for Ray, he seems mostly to have forgotten Peggy, to have reduced her to an idea, a pretty silk scarf. The conflict he engineers with Coleman is far more interesting to him, far more vital.

As with every duel ever fought, this was never about the woman. It’s a dick-measuring contest. I would love to know if Highsmith herself saw it that way, though I suspect not. Men like Coleman and Ray fascinated her in and of themselves for the curious nullity, the restless dissatisfaction at the heart of their obsessions.

As a writer, I feel there is so much I can learn from Highsmith. Again and again she delivers books in which craft and art are in symbiosis, perfectly weighted and working as one. Her writing is never showy – there is a pared-back, less-is-more quality to it that nonetheless has an element of refinement and literary knowingness that is woefully absent from much of today’s ultra-slick thriller writing.

The landscape of her books – street scene, social milieu and most of all the atmosphere of certain bars, restaurants, hotels, resorts and apartment buildings – is memorably evocative. Rather than relying on hectic and unconvincing circumstantial twists, the drama of her peculiar plots is rendered more or less entirely through the medium of character.

There is no trickery, no formal fireworks. The stories Highsmith tells appear to be simple, even uneventful. Yet there is something, a perplexing oddity, a fierce beauty that makes them both readable and memorable. You may not always get a murder but Highsmith has a way of highlighting the strangeness at the heart of normality that might make you imagine a murder where none has taken place. That’s how it is at the end of Those Who Walk Away. We don’t really have a clue what Coleman and Garrett are going to do next, whether they’ll never see each other again, as each insists, or whether their bizarre duel is going to continue until one of them dies.  

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